It is always very exciting when one is presented with the opportunity to learn more about a new individual, especially when that individual is as fascinating as 14 year old Kevin, whose colourful personality has been present since the day he was born in Waterloo,
Ontario, to a family now consisting of 6 people.
if it is, how should I change it?
yes it is.
Run On Sentence - Oh When The Wind Comes Down - $9.97 : HUSHshop ::
HUSHshop Run On Sentence - Oh When The Wind Comes Down - Run On Sentence - Oh When The Wind Comes Down Sampler Mix While living on the lush grounds of a
http://hushrecords.dreamhosters.com/zencart/index.php?main_page=index&cPath=32_41HOME |
It is always very exciting when one is presented with the opportunity to learn more about a new individual. Particularly when that individual is as fascinating as 14 year old Kevin. Born in Waterloo, Ontario to a family now consisting of 6 people, his colorful personality has been present since the day he was born.
It is always very exciting when one is presented with the opportunity to learn more about a new individual, especially when that individual is as fascinating as 14 year old Kevin. Kevin's colourful personality has been present since the day he was born in Waterloo,
TAPPED Archive | The American Prospect::
Just because a sentence is long does not make it a run-on sentence. Clearly this is not a run-on sentence, it just has the extra "today" in it.
http://www.prospect.org/csnc/blogs/tapped_archive?month=05&year=2008&base_name=obama_campaign_wins_runon_sentHOME |
Big Is The New Small - Rambling Run-On Sentence::
Dec 5, 2008 600Commentshttp://bigisthenewsmall.com/?p=600Rambling+Run-On+Sentence2008-12-05+ 14%3A02%3A10Scott+Williams Received
http://bigisthenewsmall.com/?p=600HOME |
Ontario, to a family now consisting of 6 people.
It's obnoxiously long, but grammatically it is fine. The one person was right about hyphenating 14-year-old, as you're using it as a single term, but otherwise you're fine.
Yes it is. You need to hyphenate 14-year-old, and then put a period after "Kevin." Then just begin a new sentence.
sorry yes it is- It is always very exciting when one is presented with the opportunity to learn more about a new individual, especially when that person is as fascinating as 14 year old Kevin. Kevin's colorful personality has been present since the day he was born to a family of 6 in Waterloo, Ontario.
yes i think it is. add more full stops instead of commas, It has helped me in my homework greatly
It is always......a new individual. This is especially true when that......Ontario. (drop the jfamily now consisting of 6 people--doesn't add anything to the flow of idea. You can put it in later if necessary).
Surprisingly, no it is not a run-on. I say surprisingly because it is super long.
it is DEFINITELY a run on sentence. it looks like a paragraph!!! you should write it like this: It is always very exciting when one is presented with the opportunity to learn about a new individual, especially when that individual is as fascinating as 14 year old Kevin. His colorful personality has been present since the day he was born in Waterloo Ontario, to a family now consisting of 6 people.
 Red Hat's Rough Recovery From CFO Exit
 Windows Live Finds a New, Pre-installed Home |
Is this a run on sentence???